GameMasterShania's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Forever Alone Cover]

Good

I just want to ask you a question about Kate-chan's scarf. It looks like a Griffindor Quidditch scarf, was that intentional?

Fifty-50 responds:

No, but it really does doesn't it? I must have done that subconsciously.

[Good Feeling]

Thanks

Thanks for the fanart. :)

Aigis responds:

Huh.

[Animu Thingy]

Nice work

First, what I like about this.

The art style is good. Big shiny eyes and tiny noses and mouthes looks nice.

Also, I like the pigtails because they're a contrast to the juper, having red paralell blue.

Also the gloves. Those look really warm and cozy.

The extra outline around the body, it's very faint, but it's there and adds atmosphere like the rays of body warmth being clearly depicted.

That scarf is brilliant. The crease effect is adding a lot to the picture, and I have a question about this. That scarf looks like a Griffindor Quidditch scarf - were you going for that?

Now, some points to improve.

Her eyes - one iris is clearly bigger than the other, and so is the pupil.

The colour, if you look at her shoulder, slides out of the outline a bit.

The stockings look a little bit sketchy compared to the rest of the drawing and I'm assuming (correct me if I'm wrong) that they were done last, and you were excited and rushed the outline.

Overall, I give you an 8/10 for effort, great work and hopes to help improve your art.

Fifty-50 responds:

Yep. I suck at animu lolz.

[Forever Alone pg 1]

A fan-art/parody?

Since now I know you MEAN for this to be a parody of Incomplete, I'll give you an honest review.

In the bottom-left corner, Courtney-chan's right iris (on our left) is slightly lopsided compared to the other.

In that final panel, Courtney-chan's hand looks strage... I don't know what makes it seem that way, though.

In the first panel, her ear is very squared. Not that I'm any better at drawing ears, it would help to practice a bit.

Now I want to say I like the style; with the big, shiny eyes, and tiny mouthes. And in the first panel, the way her hair shadows her eyes is so cute.

Fifty-50 responds:

Thanks for the critique mate! I'll try to improve on that. So I can really publish it someday and become famous. And no my characters aren't 10 (creepy) nor Catholic. And Courtney-chan is the only lesbian here lol